you absolute legend - much love
Idea is good.
Would make a great RPG. Nice thinking.
One big flaw - PLEASE CHANGE!!
The "next" button would be a lot better if it was always in the same place, so you wouldn't have to keep moving your mouse: Just leave it if the far bottom right.
Or you could even make a clear button of the whole screen, using alpha at 0%.
I know I know. I'll change it in the next episode. Just stop going on about it. @_@
(talking about everyone).
I know flash is a lot of work for art and images, so no one expects it right on the first attempt. Your style could have been a little different.
The rest was ok, you should be pleased. The only error was the missle moving around, they fly straight, the effect you needed was to move the rest of the scene as well as the missle. This shaking effect is to imply great force and speed, which when seen requires a lot of focus to see, thus you have to keep changing your view to spot it.
It's pretty good. Keep going.
Can we say: Tallent
Images clean and sharp, effects at top flash standards, characters not insulting to original creation... Lucus would love to see this I figure, though he would be the first to ask for royalties if you tried to market it.
You're extremely good, probably professional, but if not it's obviously what you should be doing.
Obi Wann breaking out of the ground was a little weird. I think if you gave him a bit of a more natural entrance, just appearing from behind a vaporator, it would have been a little more to the style. But that's such a minor point.
I would be extremely interesting in your own sci-fi esque animation, even if you charged.
your a collab noob. What's next, stick cartoons?
Anyone who doesn't see the huge skill in this is..
I have NO idea how you're so skilled for your first attempted or how you managed to successful reprocess an old idea of superhero animal so well. I doubled up laughing yet was (some what) intimidated by your villain.
It's an awesome idea and executed far better than I've seen TV/"signed" animations. You've already toped yourself, and you've not even done anything else to top.
Well... you see
You might want to stick with the clay - Why you ask?
Because as human beings, you can move. You might as well have recorded it. The sliding over the bed wouldn't have worked, fair enough. Then you'd have to do more "imposible" stuff to make this worthwhile.
The kitty thing was pretty good though. Go down that road.
What about the falling down the stairs? that couldnt be done with video, lol(unless she wanted to break her neck)
I rather liked this
All I ask is, please please - do a whole team! a squad! a whole war! It would work so well with the scale you are using.
I was thinking about that. but when i got in the middle of this animation. i descovered the union skin.
so maybe in part 2
I like the comedy
I liked the comical blips, it might be worth you working on the writing of jokes more before going to flash.
Sweet, shame about the walking.
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